Ok so the comments I received this time around didn't really have many constructive criticisms for me to go off of. Just a few of the classic "great job" and "I really like your idea!", but there was a little somethin' somethin' for me to go off of. First, I got a little more in depth on how I'm going to work with my supply chain to make sure it is efficient and can maintain our restaurants. Second, this idea came from one of the comments I got saying how, back in high school, they were on a sports team and that is how they got their workout in. But now that they are in college, there is no one to make a workout for them. This was also a problem that I experienced when making the transition to college. What if I implemented something that could cater to this need for students to not only eat healthily but get fit? Please leave some constructive feedback that I could work with.
Here is the link to my video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=op0bnxBQjNk
Thanks guys! And don't forget the constructive criticisms!
Hey Dakotah, great job on your blog post! I really enjoyed listening to your elevator pitch. It sounds like you have a really unique idea that a lot of people could certainly relate to and make good use of. I thought you did a good job of incorporating feedback from previous posts in to this third attempt. Best of luck with your venture, I hope it works out! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteIf you would like to check out my third attempt at an elevator pitch, you can find it by following this link: http://entrepreneurshipbyisa.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3-week-10.html
Hey Dakotah! I really like the introduction to your blog post! You really thought about the criticism people gave you, and thought more broadly about your service. That's really important! As for your elevator pitch, I really liked how you focused on the supply food chain aspect of your business. You did your research, and that was really great. I really like your idea on making your business a fitness help center too. It makes your business unique and different from competing businesses. I too had to think of a way to make my product different from others in the market. Check out my elevator pitch! Hopefully you like it! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=op0bnxBQjNk
ReplyDeleteThat's a pretty neat idea and of course the end goal is to make sure college age folks establish and maintain healthy eating habits while in school and then of course, later on once they are in the work force. Fast food thrives on students so I think as far as that goes, as long as its relevant and done with taste and caloric content in mind, you'll be successful. Good luck with the rest of the assignments this semester and if you'd like to read my blog post, you can find it here: http://ruben-s-castro.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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